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Gareth's Equipment

Post by Guest on Wed Mar 04, 2015 2:10 pm

Weapon/Armor name: Knight's Sword and Shield
Weapon/Armor rank: Amateur
Description:
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Sword- A standard issue military sword, made of folded steel. It's double edged blade is roughly three and a half feet feet long, six inches wide. The hilt is also made of steel, the handle wrapped in leather straps to grip the blade firmly.

Shield -- A standard issue military shield, made of reinforced wood and steel. The top of the shield, about 2 feet across, is flat, as it's edges go down about 2 and a half feet, before the edges slant inwards, for an additional half a foot. The shield is bordered in wood with studded metal every so many intervals. The right of the shield holds an embroidered pattern in metal. A metal strip, also studded in intervals, separates the left side, which holds three blue sides going down it's length, sporting the Hylian blue.

Ability/Spell name: No abilities to these weapons
Description: N/A
Duration and Cooldown: N/A
Strength: The weapons are sturdy, better than most weapons commoners, recruits, bandits, and monsters have.
Weakness: More significant character will outclass his weapons easily. They will waver under the blows of stronger creatures.


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Re: Gareth's Equipment

Post by Guest on Wed Mar 04, 2015 3:08 pm

1.) The ability is registered as Shield Bash but called Shield Attack everywhere else. Tis a minute detail...

2.) Maybe a move like Helm Splitter is a bit much at the time. It seems a bit complex for an amateur to me.
(Debatable.)
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Post by Guest on Sat Mar 07, 2015 10:51 am

Fixed! Yeah, the more I looked at Helm Splitter, the more I questioned, can a recruit do that? Link, maybe, but anyone else? Nah.
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Re: Gareth's Equipment

Post by Oliver Windhelm on Sat Mar 07, 2015 2:51 pm

Yo, you haven't bought an ability slot for this weapon, so you can't have one. Edit it out please, and thank you!

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Post by Guest on Sun Mar 08, 2015 12:22 pm

Fixed once more!
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Post by Oliver Windhelm on Sun Mar 08, 2015 12:40 pm

This needs at least one strength and one weakness. Also, maybe you can add the length and width of the shield, and the length of the sword?

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Post by Guest on Mon Mar 09, 2015 12:42 pm

*Puts down hammer, wiping sweat from brow* Fixed again! How about now? ;P
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Post by Oliver Windhelm on Mon Mar 09, 2015 12:50 pm

APPROVED!

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